This is an excellent little one shot. I enjoyed the setting since it shows Elsanna works in any AU; you had the charachterizations spot-on. The scrabble game was also a great little touch (even if there are not enough "y's" for syzygy). For me, the only negative to the whole story is that you held it to a one-shot. Just this small chapter made me want to know how their whole story plays out. Nice work!